It's a fair attempt, but for me it is all wrong.
The formatting of the text is wrong.
FOOTBALL IS MY
RELIGION
LIVERPOOL
IS MY SHRINE
For me,
FOOTBALL IS MY
RELIGION
LIVERPOOL
IS MY SHRINE
looks better, but each to their own.
The phrase "IS MY SHRINE" does not sound right to me either, I may be wrong but "are my Shrine" flows better to me, but if there are any grammar nazis out there please correct me.
As for the Union Flag, and the map of the UK, don't get me started.
The colour is fine.
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