I'm alive again <- close enough
More alive than I have been <- close enough
in my whole entire life I can
see these people's ears perk up <- doesn't rhyme
as I begin to spaz with the pen, < doesn't rhyme
I'm a little bit sicker than most. <- doesn't rhyme
sh*t's finna get thick again <- doesn't rhyme
They say the competition is stiff <- doesn't rhyme
But I get a hard dick from this sh*t, now stick it in <- close enough
I ain't never giving in again <- close enough
Caution to the wind, complete freedom <- close enough
Look at these rappers, how I treat them <- close enough
So why the F**k would I join them when I beat them <- just rhymed them with them
They call me a freak because I like to <- doesn't rhyme
spit on these pussies 'fore I eat them <- them again? really?
Man get these whack cocksuckers off stage <- stage doesn't rhyme with him
Where the F**k is Kanye when you need him? <- see above
Snatch the mic from him, <- rhymed him with him, oh the talent
bi*ch I'mma let you finish in a minute <- doesn't rhyme
Yeah the rap is tight <- no it's not, it's sh*t
But I'm 'bout to spit the greatest verse of all time <- no you're not, now you're just lying
So you might want to go back to the lab tonight and um <- um ALMOST rhymes with spit
Scribble out them rhymes you were going to spit <- spit doesn't rhyme with ones
And start over from scratch and write new ones <- ones doesn't rhyme with difference
But I'm afraid that it ain't gonna make no difference <- does anyone see a pattern emerging here
When I rip this stage and tear it in half tonight
It's an adrenaline rush to feel the bass thump
In the place all the way to the parking lot, fellow
Set fire to the mic and ignite the crowd
You can see the sparks from hot metal
Cold-hearted from the day I Bogarted the game
I so started to rock fellow
When I'm not even in my harshest
You can still get roasted
because Marsh is not mellow
Til I'm toppling from the top I'm not going to stop
I'm standing on my Monopoly board <- sounds like your constipated during this line
That means I'm on top of my game <- that was a great line, back in 2007 when Joell Ortiz dropped it
and it don't stop til my hip don't hop anymore <- stop lying, there's nothing hip hop about you
When you so good that you can't say it
Because it ain't even cool for you to sound cocky anymore <-
People just get sick cause you spit
These fools can't drool or dribble a drop anymore
And you can never break my stride <- stride rhymes with pride, yay!
You never slow the momentum at any moment <- and then you go and ruin it
I'm about to blow You'll never take my pride
Killing the flow, slow venom and the opponent is getting
no mercy, mark my words
Ain't letting up, relentless I smell blood
I don't give a F**k: keep giving them hell
Where was you when I fell and needed help up?
I've given up half way through. Here's how to rhyme and flow. Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you R.A. The Rugged Man with "Uncommon Valour". R.A.'s father was a Vietnam veteran affected by Agent Orange. His family was forever changed by the potent chemical — his brother Maxx was born handicapped and blind, eventually dying at the age of 10, while his sister Dee Ann couldn’t walk or speak (She later died in 2007 at the age of 27). R.A. tells the story of his father, John A. Thorburn who passed away on the 7th of January 2010 from cancer. This is the video he specially made commemorating his father's death:
R.A. The Rugged Man - "Uncommon Valor" [Music Video]
